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Chapter 1 Six Considerations in Academic Writing

1¡¢Academic writing is a product of many consideration : audience, purpose, organization, style, flow and presentation.

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(1) description of a situation £¨ÃèÊöÇé¿ö£© (2) Identification of a problem £¨Õç±ðÎÊÌ⣩ (3) Description of a solution £¨ÃèÊö½â¾ö·½·¨£© (4) Evaluation of the solution £¨ÆÀ¹À½â¾ö·½·¨£©

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(1) Generally avoid contractions £¨Ò»°ãÀ´½²±ÜÃâʹÓÃÂÔËõ´Ê£© Àý£ºwon¡¯t¸ÄΪwill not

(2) Use the more appropriate formal negative forms £¨Ê¹ÓøüΪÊÊÒ˵ÄÕý¹æµÄ·ñ¶¨ ÐÎʽ£©

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(3) Limit the use of ¡°run-on¡± expressions, such as and so forth and etc. £¨ÏÞÖÆÊ¹Óà ¶à¸ö´ÊÁ¬Óõıí´ï·¨£©

Àý£º¾ä×ÓÄÚ²»ÄܳöÏÖand so forthºÍetc.³öÏÖʱӦ½«Ê¡ÂԵIJ¿·ÖÀ©Õ¹³öÀ´¡£ (4) Avoid addressing the reader as you(except, of course, if you are writing a textbook or other instructional materials). £¨±ÜÃâÏò¶ÁÕß˵¡°Ä㡱£© Àý£ºYou can see the results in Table 1. ¸ÄΪ£ºThe results can be seen in Table 1.

(5) Be careful about using direct questions. In some fields they are common, while in others they are not. £¨Ê¹ÓÃÖ±½ÓÒýÓïʱÐè½÷É÷£© Àý£ºWhat can be done to lower costs?

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(6) Place adverb within the verb. £¨½«¸±´Ê·ÅÓÚ¶¯´Ê´Ê×éÄÚ£© Àý£ºThis model was developed by Krugman originally. ¸ÄΪ£ºThis model was originally developed by Krugman.

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(7) Consider whether you should split infinitives.£¨¿¼ÂÇÊÇ·ñ¸ÃʹÓøîÁѲ»¶¨Ê½£© Àý£ºWe need to adequately meet the needs of those enrolled in the program. (8) Aim for an efficient use of words. £¨Ä¿µÄÊÇΪÁËÓÐЧµØÊ¹Óôʻ㣩 Àý£ºThere are some inorganic materials that can be used by bioengineers in the process of tissue engineering that have been shown to be very promising. ¸ÄΪ£ºSome inorganic materials used in tissue engineering have shown great promise. ϰÌ⣺

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the initial trust of individual.

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than it is now as a construction material.

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¸ÄΪ£ºThese special tax laws have been enacted in six mid western states: Illinois, Iowa, Indiana, Ohio, Michigan, and Minnesota.

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Chapter 2 Two Underlying Structures in Academic Writing

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1¡¢Two underlying structures in academic writing£º£¨×¨ÒµÐ´×÷µÄÁ½¸ö»ù±¾½á¹¹£©

(1) general-specific structure £¨·ºÂÛ-ÌØÖ¸(GS)½á¹¹£© (2) problem-process-solution structure £¨ÎÊÌâ-¹ý³Ì-½â¾ö·½·¨£©

2¡¢GS texts usually begin with one of the following: £¨GSÎı¾Í¨³£ÒÔÏÂÁÐÒ»ÖÖÐÎʽ¿ªÊ¼£©

(1) A short or extended definition £¨¼ò¶Ì»òÍØÕ¹¶¨Ò壩 (2) A contrastive or comparative definition £¨¶Ô±È»ò±È½Ï¶¨Ò壩 (3) A generalization or purpose statement £¨Ò»°ã»¯»òÄ¿±êÐÔ³ÂÊö£© (4) A statement of fact. £¨ÊÂʵ³ÂÊö£©

3¡¢Super ordinate-category word£ºtechnique, method, process, device, and system. £¨³¬¼¶×ø±ê´Ê£©

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(1). metal that is often used ¡ª> metal often used (2). device that is capable of ¡ª> device capable of (3). roof which is on top of ¡ª> roof on top of

(4). precipitation which results from ¡ª> precipitation resulting from (5). This sentence cannot be reduced.

(6). flute that is pitched an octave higher ---> flute pitched an octave higher

(7). a process that involves the selective transport¡ª> a process involving the selective transport

(8). a celestial body which has approximately the same mass ¡ª> a celestial body with approximately the same mass

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£¨3£©First, the glass is cut to size and inspected to determine if it has any

imperfections. It is then heated to over 600oC and cooled in a step known as quenching.

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Chapter 3 Data Commentary£¨Êý¾ÝÐÅÏ¢½â¶Á£©

1¡¢In many disciplines the data is displayed in a table, graph, figure, or some other kind of non-verbal illustration.£¨ÔÚÐí¶àѧ¿ÆÖУ¬Êý¾ÝÐÅÏ¢¶¼ÊÇÒÔͼ±í¡¢Í¼ÐΡ¢ Êý¾Ýͳ¼ÆÍ¼»ò·Ç¿ÚͷͼʾµÄ·½Ê½Õ¹Ê¾³öÀ´¡££©

2¡¢Structure of Data Commentary£¨Êý¾ÝÐÅÏ¢½â¶ÁµÄ»ù±¾½á¹¹£©

A¡¢Location elements and/or summary statements.£¨¶¨Î»ÒªËغÍ/»ò×ܽá³ÂÊö£© B¡¢Highlighting statements.£¨Ç¿µ÷³ÂÊöÄÚÈÝ£©

C¡¢Discussions of implications, problems, exceptions, recommendations, etc.£¨¶Ô ÄÚº­º¬Òå,ÎÊÌâ,ÀýÍâÇé¿ö,ÍÆ¼öµÈµÄÌÖÂÛ£© 3¡¢Location elements and summaries.£¨¶¨Î»ÒªËغÍ×ܽᣩ

A¡¢Starting a Data Commentary.£¨¿ªÊ¼Êý¾Ý½â¶Á£©

B¡¢Passives in Starting a Data Commentary.£¨ÓÃÔÚ¿ªÊ¼Êý¾Ý½â¶ÁÖеı»¶¯Ê½£© C¡¢Verbs in Indicative and Informatives Summaries.£¨ÓÃÔÚ³ÂÊöÐÔºÍÐÅÏ¢ÐÔ×ܽá Öе͝´Ê£©

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Chapter 4 Summary and Abstract Writing£¨×ܽáÓëժҪд×÷£©

1¡¢Principle Requirements for a good Summary£¨Ò»·ÝÁ¼ºÃµÄÈÎÎñ×ܽá¾ß±¸ËĸöÖ÷ ÒªÐèÇó£©

(1) It should be focused on the relevant aspects of the source text or texts and present a comprehensive view of all the main points of the original.£¨ ËüÓ¦¾Û½¹ÓÚÀ´Ô´ÎÄ ±¾µÄÏà¹Ø·½Ãæ²¢ÄܳÊÏÖ¶ÔÈ«²¿Ô­Ê¼ÒªµãµÄ×ÛºÏÐԹ۵㣩

(2) It should present the source material in an accurate and objective fashion.£¨ËüÓ¦ÒÔ ¾«È·¡¢¿Í¹ÛµÄÐÎʽ³ÊÏÖÀ´Ô´²ÄÁÏ£©

(3) It should condense the source material and be presented in the summary writer¡¯s own words and avoid terminology.£¨ ËüÓ¦ÄýËõÀ´Ô´²ÄÁϲ¢ÒÔ×ܽáд×÷Õß×Ô¼ºµÄ ÎÄ×Ö³ÊÏÖ³öÀ´,¶øÇÒÒª±ÜÃâÓÃרҵÊõÓ

(4) Provide an independently referential summary, and keep the length in control.£¨Ìá ¹©ÍêÈ«¶ÀÁ¢µÄ²ÎÔÄÐÔ×ܽᣬ²¢ÄÜ¿ØÖÆÆäÎÄÕ³¤¶È£© 2¡¢Ð´×÷×ܽáµÄ»ù±¾²½Öè

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3¡¢Basic Structure of Abstract Writing£¨ÕªÒªÐ´×÷µÄ»ù±¾½á¹¹£©

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Part II Basal English Writing £¨»ù´¡Ó¢Óïд×÷£©

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1¡¢The comma£¨¶ººÅ£© 2¡¢The period£¨¾äºÅ£© 3¡¢The semicolon£¨·ÖºÅ£© 4¡¢The colon£¨Ã°ºÅ£© 5¡¢The question mark£¨Îʺţ© 6¡¢The quotation mark£¨ÒýºÅ£© 7¡¢The exclamation mark£¨¸Ð̾ºÅ£© 8¡¢The dash£¨ÆÆÕۺţ©

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Chapter 2 Vocabulary£¨´Ê»ã£©

1¡¢Levels of diction : formal and informal, abstract£¨³éÏó£© and concrete£¨¾ßÌ壩, and general£¨Áýͳ£© and specific£¨ÌØÖ¸£©. It also includes how to appreciate the connotative£¨ÒýÉ꺬Ò壩 as well as denotative£¨×ÖÃæº¬Ò壬±¾Ò壩 meanings of words.

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Chapter 3 English Sentence Writing£¨Ó¢Óï¾ä×Óд×÷£©

1¡¢Types of sentences£¨¾ä×ÓµÄÀàÐÍ£© P114 £¨1£©According to structure £¨¸ù¾Ý½á¹¹£©

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£¨1£©He thought the painting was of little value. He let me have it for only ten pounds.(Compound)

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£¨2£©I always take my raincoat whenever I go out these days.(Periodic) ¸ÄΪ£ºWhenever I go out these days, I always take my raincoat.

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£¨4£©The firemen fought for three hours. They finally managed to put out the fire.(Complex)

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£¨5£©Nobody in this world is quite perfect. We all have some faults.(Compound)

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¸ÄΪ£ºNobody in this world is quite perfect; we all have some faults.£¨»òÕß Nobody in this world is quite perfect, for we all have some faults.£© £¨6£©The train is going to Dalian. The train leaves at 20:15. (Simple) ¸ÄΪ£ºThe train to Dalian leaves at 20:15.

£¨7£©In spite of the interruption, he was able to finish all his exercises before the class was over. (Loose)

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£¨8£©Many people choose travel by air. It is fast. It offers convenience. It is not very expensive. (Parallel Structure)

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£¨1£©Effective sentences have some or all of the following qualities : unity£¨Ò»ÖÂÐÔ£©, coherence£¨Á¬¹áÐÔ£©, conciseness£¨¼ò½àÐÔ£©, emphasis£¨Ç¿µ÷ÐÔ£©, and variety £¨¶àÑùÐÔ£©.

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£¨1£©This composition is quite good as far as the use of language is concerned, but its content is poor.

¸ÄΪ£ºThis composition is good in language but poor in content. £¨The language of this composition is quite good but its content is rather poor.£© £¨2£©The young man is honest and hardworking, and is a very reliable worker. ¸ÄΪ£ºThe young man is an honest, hardworking and reliable worder.£¨The young worker is honest, hardworking and reliable.£© £¨3£©Dufu was one of the best-known poets.

¸ÄΪ£ºDufu was one of the best-known poets in Tang Dynasty. £¨4£©A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds.

¸ÄΪ£ºA man is judged not only by what he says but also by what he does.£¨A man is judged not only by his words but also by his deeds.£©

£¨5£©We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman. ¸ÄΪ£ºWe thought she was charming, intelligent and capable.

£¨6£©To get ready for the trip, all the things she needed were put into a suitcase. ¸ÄΪ£ºTo get ready for the trip, she put all the things he needed into a suitcase.

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£¨7£©Those who wish to take linguistics are expected to sign his name on this sheet of paper.

¸ÄΪ£ºThose who wish to take linguistics are expected to sign their name on this sheet of paper.

£¨8£©When one thies hard enough, you can do almost anything. ¸ÄΪ£ºWhen one thies hard enough, he can do almost anything.

£¨9£©For years I have been attending summer camp and enjoyed every minute of it. ¸ÄΪ£ºFor years I have been attending summer camp and enjoying every minute of it. £¨10£©When I saw the grade on my report card, I was terribly disappointed , because I studied very hard.

¸ÄΪ£ºWhen I saw the grade on my report card, I was terribly disappointed , because I had studied very hard.

£¨11£©If I were rich and she was single, Iwould marry her. ¸ÄΪ£ºIf I were rich and she wrer single, Iwould marry her.

£¨12£©They insisted that the money be collected and that a receipt be given in teturn. ´Ë¾äÕýÈ·¡£

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£¨1£©Tom and his sweetheart married in the early part of the month of October. ¸ÄΪ£ºTom and his sweetheart married in early October.

£¨2£©In 1979, there was a strike participated in by five thousand union workers. ¸ÄΪ£ºIn 1979, five thousand unions participated in the strike.

£¨3£©The cause of the flood was due to heavy rain in late spring. ¸ÄΪ£ºThe flood was due to heavy rain in late spring.

£¨4£©There are a number of students from our institute who are planning to join the expedition.

¸ÄΪ£ºA number of students are planning to join the expedition. £¨5£©What I am trying to say is that in my opinion he is a very honest man. ¸ÄΪ£ºIn my opinion he is a very honest man.

£¨6£©I came to this institute because of many factors, but most of all of the fact that I want to be an interpreter.

¸ÄΪ£ºI came to this institute because I want to be an interpreter. £¨7£©These watermelons are large in size and sweet in taste. ¸ÄΪ£º These watermelons are large and sweet.

£¨8£©At the present time I am taking the course of World History and in addition a course in Geography too.

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¸ÄΪ£ºAt present I am taking World History and Geography. £¨9£©We planned to meet just before sunrise very early in the morning. ¸ÄΪ£ºWe planned to meet before sunrise. £¨10£©His attitude was of a puzzling nature. ¸ÄΪ£ºHis attitude was puzzling.

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£¨1£©He was selfless, hardwording and modest; that¡¯s why he became a great scientest.

¸ÄΪ£ºHe became a great scientist because he was modest, selfless, and hardworking.

£¨2£©As a clerk, John was honest, efficient and well-dressed. ¸ÄΪ£ºJohn was a well-dressed, honest, and efficient clerk.

£¨3£©Jane walked out of his life, bursting into tears as she left the room.

¸ÄΪ£ºAs she left the room, Jane, bursting into tears, walked out of his life. £¨4£©China has changed a great deal as a result of reform and the open policy duting the past 14 years.

¸ÄΪ£ºAs a result of the reform and the open policy during the past 14 years, China has changed a great deal.

£¨5£©Huang, the famous writer, was among his neighbors.

¸ÄΪ£ºHuang, who was among his neighbors, was a famous writer. £¨6£©Social position, reputation, even life itself, and friends,were no longer interesting to him after he went bankrupt.

¸ÄΪ£º After he went bankrupt, friends, social position, reputation, even life itself were no longer interesting to him.

10¡¢³£¼ûµÄÓï·¨´íÎó£º P143 ÊéÖÐÿ¸öÕýÈ·µÄ¾ä×Ó¶¼Òª¿´ ¡ù £¨1£©Misused parts of speech£¨Óôí´ÊÐÔ£©£» £¨2£©Sentence fragments£¨²Ðȱ¾ä£©£» £¨3£©Run-on sentences£¨Á÷Ë®¾ä£©£»

£¨4£©Misplaced modifiers & dangling modifiers£¨ÎóÖÃÐÞÊÎÓëÐüÐé½á¹¹£©£» £¨5£©Problem in agreement and reference£¨Ò»ÖÂÓëÖ¸´úÎÊÌ⣩¡£ 11¡¢Á·Ï°Ìâ P146 Ð޸IJÐȱ¾ä

£¨1£©After returning from the beach. The children were exhausted. ¸ÄΪ£ºAfter returning from the beach, the children were exhausted. £¨2£©John neglecting his duties and spending time on independent research. ¸ÄΪ£ºJohn neglected his duties and spent time on independent research.

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£¨3£©Karen dropped calculus. Which she had dropped severall times before. ¸ÄΪ£ºKaren dropped calculus, which she had dropped severall times before. £¨4£©Working together to save our environment. We can leave the world a better place than wo found it.

¸ÄΪ£ºWorking together to save our environment, we can leave the world a better place than wo found it.

£¨5£©Ellen returned the lost wallet to the man. Proving that she is an honest person. ¸ÄΪ£ºEllen returned the lost wallet to the man, which proved that she is an honest person.

£¨6£©Some errors in writing are serious. For example, sentence fragments, and run-on sentences.

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£¨1£©Some people say they care for the environment while they litter cigarette buts or fruit skins just about anywhere they happen to be.

¸ÄΪ£ºSome people say they care for the environment, yet they litter cigarette buts or fruit skins just about anywhere they happen to be.

£¨2£©Lili is not worried about paying for her college education, she has just received a full scholarship.

¸ÄΪ£ºLili is not worried about paying for her college education because she has just received a full scholarship.

£¨3£©We finished the work by nine o¡¯clock in the evening then we went home. ¸ÄΪ£ºWe finished the work by nine o¡¯clock in the evening and then we went home.

£¨4£©At high noon a big and noisy party was going on next door, I could not take my usual nap.

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£¨1£©The robber was a six-foot-man with a mustache weighing 150 pounds. ¸ÄΪ£ºThe robber weighing 150 pounds was a six-foot-man with a mustache. £¨2£©He sold the old car to the man with leather seats. ¸ÄΪ£ºHe sold the old car with leather seats to the man.

£¨3£©Tom bought an old car from a crooked dealer with a faulty transmission.

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¸ÄΪ£ºTom bought an old car with a faulty transmission from a crooked dealer. £¨4£©Unconcerned about his own life, the little girl drowning in the icy river was saved by a passer-by.

¸ÄΪ£ºUnconcerned about his own life, a passer-by saved the little girl drowning in the icy river.

£¨5£©The puppy that Mary¡¯s dad picked up in the woods was returned to her owner. ¸ÄΪ£ºThe puppy that Mary¡¯s dad picked up in the woods was returned to his owner.

£¨6£©I was shocked to see a T-shirt in that fancy dress store which had a price tag of $2000.

¸ÄΪ£ºI was shocked to see in that fancy dress store a T-shirt which had a price tag of $2000.

£¨7£©She felt she should have known that neither Margie nor Tim would open thier hearts completely to her.

¸ÄΪ£ºShe felt she should have known that neither Margie nor Tim would open his heart completely to her.

£¨8£©One of the computers placed in the center of the office have internet access. ¸ÄΪ£ºOne of the computers placed in the center of the office has internet access.

£¨9£©The directer, along with all the other members on the committee, are enthusiastic about my proposal.

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£¨10£©The applicant¡¯s list of credentials are rather long. ¸ÄΪ£ºThe applicant¡¯s list of credentials is rather long.

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£¨4£©Substitution of pronouns for key nouns.£¨Óôú´ÊÌæ»»Ö÷ÒªÃû´Ê£© £¨5£©Transition words and phrases.£¨Ê¹Óùý¶É´ÊºÍ´Ê×飩 4¡¢ºÏÀíÅÅÐò P161 £¨P161-P167Àý×ÓÈ«¿´£©

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Chapter 5 English Essay Writing£¨ÎÄÕÂд×÷£©

1¡¢Structure of english essays £¨ÎÄÕ½ṹ£©

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Thesis: Riding a Bicycle is of Great Pleasure Introduction: The commonness of tiding a bicycle I. Relatively inexpensive A. To buy B. To operate

II. Healthy

A. A lot of exercise B. No pollution III. Personally satisfying A. To enjoy the scenery B. To become part of nature

IV. Conclusion:very pleasurable and helpful

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Thesis: Riding a Bicycle is of Great Pleasure

Introduction: Nowadays, it is very common for people to ride a bicycle. I. Riding a bicycle is relatively inexpensive A. It is relatively inexpensive to buy a bicycle. B. It is relatively inexpensive to operate a bicycle. II. Riding a bicycle is healthy.

A. Riding a bicycle can make us do a lot of exercise B. Riding a bicycle causes no pollution.

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III. Riding a bicycle is personally satisfying.

A. Riding a bicycle can help us enjoy the scenery. B. Riding a bicycle can make us become part of nature.

IV. Conclusion: Riding a bicycle is very pleasurable and helpful.

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