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One possible version:
Parents Should Be Responsible For Children's Behaviors
The passage mainly tells us that parents play an important part in children's growth, suggesting that no matter how busy parents are, they should spend more time staying with their children and give proper instructions.
We know it is important for children to develop good habits. So it is disappointing and sad to see some children around us showing bad habits. As far as I am concerned, parents should be responsible for helping children develop good habits. The reasons are as follows. To start with, it is commonly held that parents are the first teacher of their children. The children adopt many ways and thoughts of their parents as they are growing. What¡¯s more, parents' duties include not only providing food and clothing, but also knowledge and common sense required to go on well in society.
Therefore, I hope parents can spend more time staying with their children, giving proper guidance to their children. Meanwhile, parents should mind their words and acts, setting a good example to their children.