2020最新中考英语试题解析汇编(第01期)专题13 书面表达 下载本文

注意:文中若出现“Jack\,该作文得分不超过12分。 Weekend or Not?

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Weekend or Not?

Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sport-soccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more math exercises, which worries him a lot. Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What is worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.

I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.

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写作亮点:首段用几句话简单描述了漫画,用到了一些较好的短语(attend lots of classes,has little time for…,pushing him to do,worries him a lot),这些短语运用准确,能使文章首段非常有吸引力。第二段描述了自己的观点,使用了一些议论文常用的句式(…believe it necessary for … to…,As a result, What is worse,),文章末尾有自己的希望,清晰简练地表达了自己的观点。总体来说这篇文章分段清晰,每段功能准确,表意明确,有一定的说理性,完成了既定的写作任务。

19.【2018年浙江省义乌市】你校英语社团正在开展主题为“ How do students find study partners?”的讨论,为此你采访了一些学生,请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文进行交流,并说明你自己的方式及理由。 方式 理由 方便找到学伴 部分学生 使用网络 及时得到帮助 面对面分享经验 部分学生 参加社团 共同解决问题 你

注意:(1)短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节; (2)你的理由至少两条; (3)词数:80-100;

(4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:学伴 study partner 方便的convenient

短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners. 【答案】I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.

Some students find study partners through the Internet. They believe it’s convenient to find

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······ ······ partners to study with online. Besides, they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. Some students prefer to join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. What’s more, they think working out problems together helps learn more easily. As for me, I’d like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun. Also, it’s a good way to learn how to get on well with others. (98 words)

亮点分析:本文写作合理、语句通顺。在文中使用了Besides,What’s more,As for me等短语,使文章衔接自然。句子They believe it’s convenient to find……的使用,增加了文章的亮点。还有so that的使用,使文章如行云流水。本文为上等作文。

20.【2018年浙江省舟山市】假设你是李华。上周六,你陪同来自美国结对学校的中学生Peter体验中国文化。请根据以下信息,用英语写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿,介绍本次活动内容并分享感受。 Activities ◆make zongzi ◆visit a tea museum ◆learn Chinese characters

注意:(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有内容,并表达感受。 (2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。

(3)词数:80-100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。

短文首句:Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chinese cultures. 【答案】Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chine cultures. Everything he experienced that day is a great attraction to him.

In the morning, Peter and I went to visit a tea museum, where he learnt a lot about Chinese tea.

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Feelings … After that, I took him home and taught him to make zongzi. Although it was a bit difficult, he still enjoyed it. In the afternoon, we had a Chinese class, learning the history of Chinese characters. He also tried to write some characters with a Chinese brush, and even lost himself in it.

Peter kept saying “Amazing!” all the way, which makes me really proud of our rich cultures.

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