nm问题解决型写作思路
基本框架
描述问题段
主题句---- 扩展句一(问题危害/原因/表现一)---- 扩展句二(问题危害/ 原因/表现二)---结尾句
说明方法段
主题句---- 扩展句一(方法一)---- 扩展句二(方法二)---扩展句三(方法三)----- 结尾句
总结观点段
过渡句--- 扩展句(“我”的建议或看法)--- 结尾句
主题句--- 扩展句一(“我”的理由一)--- 扩展句二(“我”的理由二)--- 结尾句
结构模板
1 Recently, there has been a discussion about 总述该问题。2危害/原因一。 3 Additionally, 问题危害/ 原因二. 4 Therefore, it is high time that 解决该问题。
5 The following ways can be adopted to解决该问题. / Some effective measures have been taken to解决该问题 . / Many a factor plays an important role in解决该问题. 6 Firstly,/First of all, 方法一/因素一。7 Secondly/ In addition, 方法二/因素二。8 Thirdly/ Besides/ Moreover, 方法三/因素三. 9 Only through these ways / Only in this way 该问题才能够解决。
10 It is no doubt that解决该问题的意义. 11 As for me, “我”的建议或看法. 12 总结观点。
结构模板
1 Nowadays it is generally accepted that 总述该问题。2表现/作用一。 3 Additionally, 表现/作用二. 4. Therefore, how to 总述该问题 is worth paying more attention to.
5 The following ways can be adopted to解决该问题. / Some effective measures have been taken to解决该问题 . / Many a factor plays an important role in解决该问题. 6 Firstly,/First of all, 方法一/因素一。7 Secondly/ In addition, 方法二/因素二。8 Thirdly/ Besides/ Moreover, 方法三/因素三.
9 As for me/ As far as I am concerned, “我”的建议或看法. 10 “我”的理由一. 11 Besides/ in addition, “我”的理由二。12 总结观点。
示范作文
Reduce Waste on Campus
1) 目前有些校园内浪费现象严重 2) 浪费的危害 3) 从我做起,杜绝浪费
1 Recently, there has been a discussion about waste on campus. 2 It is obvious that a great loss has been caused by wasting precious resources, such as water and electricity. 3 Additionally, our waste adds our parents and society a burden. 4 Therefore, it is high time that more attention was paid to how to solve this problem. (描述问题段)
5 The following ways can be adopted to reduce waste on campus. 6 Firstly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes and dishes. 7 Secondly, in our daily life, we must learn to be
economical and only buy what we really need. 8 Thirdly, we should turn off the light when leaving dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity. 9 Only through these ways can waste on campus be eliminated in the near future. (说明方法段)
10 It is no doubt that reduction of waste is of significance to our whole society. 11 As for me, the cultivation of good habit of thrift is most important for all of us. 12 Every college student should join in the efforts to combat the waste on campus. (总结观点段)
How to Succeed in a Job Interview 1) 面试在求职过程中的作用
2) 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是…
1 It is generally accepted that a job interview is indispensable in the process of job
hunting. 2 It is obvious that it is a good chance to display talented performance. 3 Additionally, if a job seeker can make the best use of the interview and leaves a good impression on the interviewer, he may be lucky enough to get the job competed for by many applicants. 4 Therefore, how to succeed in a job interview is worth paying more attention to. (描述问题段)
5 Many a factor plays an important role in a successful interview. 6 First of all, interviewees should dress neatly and properly since the first impression is always where we start. 7 In addition, the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude and skills for the job and his knowledge about job-related areas. 8 Moreover, a really impressive job seeker must convey a sense of self-confidence. (说明方法段)
9 As far as I am concerned, the importance of an interview can’t be overemphasized. 10 If the interviewee presents his most attractive qualities during an interview, he will most probably obtain the job he has been dreaming of. 11 Besides, opportunity is for those who are well-prepared. 12 All in all, it is necessary that we learn some points to perform better in a job interview. (总结观点段)
Traffic in the City
1) 交通是现代城市的一大问题 2) 污染和堵车时交通问题的两大体现 3) 解决交通问题的手段
1 Nowadays it is generally accepted that traffic is one of the greatest problems of a modern city. 2 As more and more people buy their own cars, air pollution as well as noise pollutions becomes more and more serious. 3 Additionally, roads are packed with cars, buses and bicycles so that traffic jam is very common. 4 Therefore, how to deal with traffic problem is worth paying more attention to.
5The following ways can be adopted. 6 Firstly, more streets and roads should be constructed. 7 Secondly, the private car ownership should be limited. 8 Thirdly, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.
9 As for me, the number of private cars should be put under control. 10 More cars mean more pollution. 11
In addition, more cars are a great challenge to roads, for the building of roads is not as speedy as the increasing of cars. 12 In a word, it is advisable that less motor vehicle be used.
How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas 1) 目前假文凭现象屡见不鲜 2) 这种现象造成的危害 3) 我们应该怎么做
1 Nowadays it is generally accepted that the flooding of fake diplomas is getting very serious. 2 It is reported that fake diplomas are very common in the job market. 3 All kinds of fake diplomas or certificates are being offered.
4 Special attention should be paid to the fact that fake diplomas are bringing great damage. 5 On one hand, employers may recruit employees who are not qualified for a certain post, causing their company a great loss. 6 On the other hand, it’s unfair that one fails to get his job just because his rival has produced a fake diploma or certificate. 7 Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to stop fake diplomas from spreading. 8 Many a way can be adopted to eliminate fake diplomas. 9 First of all, companies and universities should have a close contact so that the fake diplomas cannot play tricks. 10 In addition, the one who fabricates the fake diplomas should be severely punished by law and totally exposed through media. 11 Moreover, we should keep detained records of the diploma holders and issue the diplomas with fake-proof seal. 12 Only through these ways can this problem be tackled. On a Harmonious Dormitory life 1) 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性 2) 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活 3) “我”的看法
1 Recently, there has been a discussion about a harmonious dormitory life, which is important to us college students and benefits all the members. 2 In a harmonious environment, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study.3 Additionally, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together. 4 Therefore, it is high time that efforts were driven to boost the harmony in college residences.
5 The following ways can be adopted to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. 6 First of all, we have to evaluate our life style and try to get rid of our bad habits, if there are any. 7 Secondly, when an annoying situation arises , we have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. 8 Thirdly, we should learn to share with each other and make good friends. 9 Only through these ways can we build a harmonious dormitory life.
10 It is no doubt that dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life and no one can ignore it. 11 As for me, consideration for others is an effective solution to conflicts in life. 12 In conclusion, a harmonious dormitory environment plays a positive role in college students’ studies and lives, and we must try our best to keep it well.
现象解释型写作思路
基本框架
描述图表段
主题句---- 扩展句(描述图表数据)---结尾句
说明原因段
主题句---- 扩展句一(原因一)---- 扩展句二(原因二)---扩展句三(原因三)----- 结尾句
总结观点段
主题句--- 扩展句一(影响/问题/理由一)--- 扩展句二(影响/问题/理由二)--- 结尾句
描述现象段
主题句---- 扩展句一(现象表现一)---扩展句二(现象表现二)---结尾句
说明原因段
主题句---- 扩展句一(原因一)---- 扩展句二(原因二)---扩展句三(原因三)----- 结尾句
总结观点段
主题句--- 扩展句一(影响/理由一)--- 扩展句二(影响/理由二)--- 结尾句
结构模板 1
1 From the chart/ graph / table / picture, we clearly learn that 总述现象,which has aroused great / common concern. 1 / According to the chart, it is clear that 图表内容概括. 2 What impresses us most is 图表中重点数据. /2 The chart / graph /table /picture indicates 图表数据一,while 图表数据二.
3 There are many reasons accounting for 现象或变化. / 3 many reasons contribute to 现象概括. 4 First of all/ To begin with, 原因一. 5 What is more/ Moreover, 原因二. 6 In addition/ Besides, 原因三. 7 Therefore/ As a result, 总结原因导致的结果.
8 As to me/ As far as I am concerned, “我”的观点. 9 For one thing / On one hand, 影响/问题/理由一. 10 For another/ On the other hand, 影响/问题/理由二. 11 Thus/ In brief/ To conclude/ In conclusion/ In a word, 总结观点.
结构模板 2
1 总体现象 has been brought into focus. /1 总体现象,which has aroused great concern. 2 现象表现或变化. 3 In addition, 进一步阐述现象。
4 There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. /4 The reasons/ factors 影响该现象 are varied. 5 Among all these reasons/ factors, 原因一plays a very important role .6 阐述原因一. 7 What is more/ Moreover, 原因二. 8 In addition/ Besides, 原因三.
9 As to me/ As far as I am concerned, “我”的观点. 10 For one thing / On one hand, 具体的看法或理由一. 11 For another/ On the other hand, 进一步说明看法/理由二. 12 Thus/ In brief/ To conclude/ In conclusion/ In a word, 总结观点.