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书信写作的五点要求： １． 开门见山说意图。 ２． 详细内容1、2、3 ３． 不同内容要分段 ４． 感谢祝愿不可少 ５． 期盼回复成老套

学生真实范文：

Dear President:

I’m liming. I’m a student in Grade Three.

Today, I’m writing to you a letter, my dear, dear president. Our college has ten campuses,( but the same food in different campus) the food same, the price no same. The price is so black. Please tell me why different. The word on the menu too small to read. So we ask cooker what we eat today. At last, I love my university, I love you too. So I write you this letter.

No response, I’ll write again and again.

对比范文

Dear Mr.president,

My name is Liming, a junior from the Chemical Science School. I’m writing to talk about the canteen service on campus.

I am sorry to tell you that there are many problems in our school. Firstly, the quality of our food in our school is very bad, while the price is very high. As a result, many students prefer to have a food out of school. Secondly, good as the service of our canteen is, the environment of our canteen is very bad. Many students threw about food and rubbish everywhere the wanted. It is very disgusting for us to dine in such environment. Thirdly, our canteen is too small to provide us with enough seats. So every day we spent much time in waiting to be served, which is a waste of time for us.

Therefore, I think we should take some measures to deal with the problems. First, we should try our best to improve the quality of the food. Second, we should take measures to make the price medium. Last, we should send some students to make sure that our canteen is clean.

I am sure our canteen will become better with our efforts. I am looking

forward to seeing the change of our canteen.

Yours, Li Ming

1. 投诉信： express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding/concerning/as

regards the canteen/library/bookstore 正文：第二段

1． 改写提纲一:2句 2． 改写提纲二:2句 3． 改写提纲三:2句

第三段：2句

1. 表示感谢：My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond

words; Words fail me when i wish to express my sincere gratitude to you; I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you render me.

2. 期待回信: I am looking forward to hearing from you soon; I look forward

to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience; Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.

正文写法小结：共写10句，首尾两段（4句话）是万能句。 落款：

1. 结尾客套：Yours sincerely, 2. 签名：Li Ming

The letter of Invitation

Dec 4th ,2011

Dear _____/To someone concerned,

I am delighted to learn that_____. Several years has passed since________. In my opinion,____________. On the one hand,________. On the other hand,_________.

As to the famous sites, I suggest_________________. It is not necessary for you to _____________. In addition,___________. I am sure__________________.

Please inform me _____________. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

批评信模版

A letter of Complaint

Dear _____,

My name is __________. I am ___________. I venture to write you

a letter about ----------. The focus of the complaint is __________. For one thing __________. For another____________________.

Honestly speaking,_________. But___________.

Besides,_________. All in all, there is still much room for improvement.

I do hope ____________. Thank you for your time and kind

consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Name

It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation. Hence, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures/steps.

We should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control this problem. We should enchance/cultivate the awareness of people that this issue is vital for us.

Only in this was can we solve the problem.

I believe we hunmans can overcome this difficuly and we will have a brighter future.

1) 2) 3) 4) 5) 6)

应用文-----简历 Li Ming

P.O. Box 237, Beijing University

5, Yiheyuan Road, Haidian District, Beijing 100871 Tel: 62768888

Email: Liming@163.com

Career objective: a position with management potential in the banking business specializing in international corporate financing. Educational Background:

Sept 2003 to Beijing University

July 2007 Major in Internatioanl Business Management

Main courses include English, computer, Business Management, Accounting Work Experience:

July 2006 to Bank of China

June 2007 Internship, secretary to Deputy Manager of Marketing Draft business correspondence

Schedule deputy manager’s appointments

Qualifications: Universtiy graduation certificate and bachelor degree

to be conferred upon graduatoion (2007)

College English Test Band 4 June 2005 Honors and Awards: Twice awarded scholarship by Special Skills: Familiartiy with Microfot word Ability to work independently President of Student Union

Personal Data: Date of Birth: 9/17/1985

应用文-----书信 正文：3段 第一段：2句

第一句：自我介绍（私人书信除外） 第二句：写作目的：书信的中心思想 I am writing the letter for the purpose of ------ I am writing to inform you that i wish to

--------

2. 建议信：give/offer/propose useful/practical/conducive

suggestions/proposals/recommendations 3. 投诉信： express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding/concerning/as

regards the canteen/library/bookstore 正文：第二段

4． 改写提纲一:2句 5． 改写提纲二:2句 6． 改写提纲三:2句

第三段：2句

3. 表示感谢：My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words; Words

fail me when i wish to express my sincere gratitude to you; I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you render me.

4. 期待回信: I am looking forward to hearing from you soon; I look forward to a

favorable reply at your earlist convenience; Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.

正文写法小结：共写10句，首尾两段（4句话）是万能句。 落款：

3. 结尾客套：Yours sincerely, 4. 签名：Li Ming

5. 祝贺信 (Letter of Congratulations) 1) 祝贺信的写法

日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业、还是订婚、结婚、生日，都需要写上一封信表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。

祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。下面将具体举例说明：

2) 祝贺信模板

Date:

Dear_______ ,